Friday, March 29, 2019

Review| Lord of the Rings : The Fellowship of the Ring


I started my magical quest with a friend. Over our shared love of the LOTR movies (and yes even the Hobbit movies) we decided to pick up these books and read together. Mostly curious to learn a little more about the world, and compare the differences to the movies.

HUGE DISCLAIMER : This means my review is pretty heavily skewed by comparing it to the movie. Spoiler for the end of the review, however, we liked the movie better.

My biggest problem when reading the books is emotion. As I read I felt like Tolkien didn't write alot of emotion into this book. Actions and moments that happened, quite brilliantly in hindsight, in the film came across flat in the book. Some of my favorites were:
Gandalfs line , "We only choose what to do with the time that is given to us."
When Bilbo leaves and comes up with an ending to his book.
I felt these fell so flat in the book and made me yearn to re watch the beautiful moments of emotion in the film.

Secondly the characters came off a bit strange. Sam comes off as a complete dopey idiot. In the movie its quite endearing, the book hes too in servitude toward Frodo. Dont even get started on Bill the pony! Even if this was Sam's original intention and purpose, watching the movie and seeing the difference cant be unseen.

Lets get to the good!! Its still a wonderful magical world and I loved learning more about it! The part in Lothlorien is a particular favorite! Some of the added details of places is interesting. Pippin and Merry are more competent and interesting in the books which I enjoyed! Where they seem whiny and dumb in the movie (more so pippin than Merry) they are intelligent and helpful in the book. Although I do like their mischievous ways in the movie!
To further add to that point is the bond between them. I liked how Merry and Pippin were Frodos really good friends and helped him.  Lastly my friend and I were shocked to find out how much time passes, where it seems like a week in the movie MANY years have passed in the books.

The book definitly felt slow, a lot of it dragged and sometimes explained too much of what was happening. The final conclusion my friend and I made was how impressed were for Peter Jackson to create what he did out of this book. We're excited to get to the second and third book though where I hear it picks up and there's more action. Plus the bonds between the characters get more focus!

Thursday, March 21, 2019

Review | Heir of Ra





Heir of Ra was pretty good. Id say a solid novel, but not spectacular. Id give it three stars for not adding anything too interesting.
The Good: Alyssa is a good competent protagonist. I didnt mind following her and being in her head. The scenes with the back story were well written. She doesn't have flowery writing but the way she describes scenes and actions were top notch!

The Bad: Theres not alot for Egyptian Mythology fans. Although the civilization is talked about and experienced its not very detailed which is what I was hoping for with a book of this cover and title. The second thing that mainly bothered me is one of the side characters, Paul. He sort of just comes out of nowhere and risks his job and life for a girl he just met. Its pretty hard to believe and every scene hes in and does something showing great sacrifice or emotion for Alyssa just feels odd.
Spoiler Like for instance literally jumping in front of a blade for her and be stabbed.

 Whats kind of ridiculous and could have easily fixed this is there is a character at the beginning of the book, Jake, and he easily could have replaced Paul. He is an already established as knowing her and would be more believed to have the deep connection. Lastly is the bad guys, I honestly cant remember the difference between all the bad guys except the female who has purple eyes.

Some last minute thoughts| The TombRaider-lite feel is pretty neat, and it will definitely remind you, or make you want to play Assassin Creed while reading because it can be heavily compared to that series. (A person using her heritage to see visions of the past)

Spoilers for the Ending Twist:
I kinda wasn't feeling the twist. First off shes just announced as a "Daughter of Ra" by one of the random scientist. I dont know why he would know what she is, I dont know why they specify Ra, if Im not mistaken I think Ra is the grandfather of Horus so maybe thats why?(I didnt care to reread to check) Regardless she still wouldn't be the Daughter of Ra then but as the book is titled just an heir of Ra...
Set is randomly in the middle of the book, who is a God himself so I dont know why he was draining other Halfbreeds unless he wasnt one himself..but that wasnt clear.
Lastly they made it clear (I thought) that they needed to CONSTANTLY feed off half breeds blood to stay alive from the curse, but now Alyssas dad is permanently healed? (Im assuming from gene slicing or w/e but I dont know)
Lastly Part 2 | Alyssa basically immediately leaves her dad to go on another adventure even though he almost just died and hasnt even left the hospital yet and she spent the whole book trying to heal him. -_-

Tuesday, March 12, 2019

Dragon Pearl | Review



This one took me a while to get through. It wasn't too bad but the middle and end dragged so much it really was hard to finish. I liked the often use of her powers and how she used them. Its pretty rare that magical powers are used alot. I just finished a book last month where the main character had illusion powers and she barely used them. It made the book all the more irritating, but Dragon Pearl definitely avoided that.

There are some discussions to have on the book, like how selfish Min was, and how she really had no consequences for any decisions or actions she made. I felt like it could have spent more time on the morality of her choices or how her people were treated. I suppose it is geared more for kids, but to be honest I dont think enough exciting things even happened to recommend to a kid.

Lastly Ill touch on the end, which is really thrown in very quickly. I would say Im dissapointed that there wasnt much elaborated on in the end, but I think I was just happy for it to be over. I would have edited out the middle section and had her rewrite the end.

Id recommend to anyone who has an itch for Chinese mythology and a fan of Riordans books. I gave it 3 stars.

Monday, February 11, 2019

Zodiac | Review


I haven't read a book that started off so intense and already gut wrenching in a long time. Only into Chapter 5 and I'm already jaw-dropped thinking "oh shit."

Unfortunately it doesn't get much better after this.

She gets her role right in the early parts of the book that really felt like should have happened at the end. Like she becomes Mother from her actions throughout the book.

The "romance" is hardly necessary.  I know its natural to find people attractive. But I dont like being pulled out of the story for Rho to internally debate and think about how she feels being close to Mathias or how her first thought when seeing Hysan is "we cant date or kiss".


You know what we need before an epic end of the battle fight, a love triangle. Thanks.

Im giving this a book a 3 because if I cant think exactly what i don't like about the plot or why it bores me I just leave it to "not my thing" kind of emotion.
One thing I think can contribute to why it seems boring is the villain compared to the protagonist. At no point does it ever seems like she has an advantage and there is never "hope". It just makes you not care whats happening.

That was my initial thought until the 3rd part of the book. Im definitely giving this a book a two. I dont understand the authors plot choices or ideas. If you want more specifics spoilers below. But I dont recommend this book. Its quite boring and brings nothing new.

Whats actually laughable, is when Rho is trying to leave the main ship on her wasp. And she leaves with out Mathias but "blowing a hole to clear the door way as her ship is swept into the stars" Ok this right here sounds she just took everyone out into space with her. But before I can even really think about this the whole ship blows up and she thinks he died anyway...like how RIDICULOUS is it to have her leave a side character to protect him and him "die" because of her actions a minute later. Its just bad writing.

The whole idea of how she becomes the leader and then gets kicked out after the fight is just dumb. Literally within the last chapter she gets news her brother is ACTUALLY dead, and a page later he calls her and tells her where he is. So shes going to go get him. But we dont even see her go get him, so there was no pay off. Why did she even write this in? Why wasnt he just with the rest of the refugees?

Wednesday, February 6, 2019

Kingdom Hearts

"May your heart be your guiding key"'


I have 3 sources of pure love for pop culture in my life. That is Avatar the Last Airbender, Harry Potter, and lastly, and the subject of this blog: Kingdom Hearts.


My reading is definitely taking a nosedive for a couple of weeks due to the KH3 release. Ill make a formal review later but here I just wanted to discuss what makes Kingdom Hearts so great to me.

Growing up I wasnt very close with my family. I moved half way across the country from any extended family and that left me with just a my mom, dad and sister. Honestly any teenager can probably relate to not being close to their family growing up even if there arent issues, thats just adolescence. But to me that means Friends were everything.
Playing through Soras adventure really impressed on my young imaginative mind the idea of an unbreakable connection to your friends. I liked the passion that went into the game and the bond of these characters. Ive always been a Disney fan too. Its cute to play through the worlds and see the characters you love as you help them and create relationship with them. Its really how I used to live as I grew up. School, work, wherever I went I liked to make friends and bring them together. Bonds with humans is one of the most interesting things and something I think about alot. Sora does too.

Alot of my writing is based around strong bonds with characters and the intangible feeling of ones "heart".

 

Friday, January 25, 2019

Lord of the Rings | Buddy Reading!

After re-watching the Fellowship of the Rings for probably a thousand times I finally decided to actually read the books. I don't know why it took me so long. I think i didn't believe it had much to offer. (of course Ive heard how amazing it is) but like most I thought "Ive seen the movie, im ok" But after getting into reading in 2018 I wanted to branch out more and read books I never really thought of. Im excited to delve deeper in Tolkiens lore and get more of a back story to all these characters Ive loved from the movie!

Tuesday, January 22, 2019

Random Write| Star Wars Character Design

Genetics and Planet History. |
Faiyen Fuocello (Fwo Che-loh) is native to a planet in the outer rim.Names Haelios (not in true Star WARS lore this is made up)its close proximity to the sun has the inhabitants accustomed to solar rays. Like the majority of the surface people on his planet Faiyen has bleached blonde hair and dark tan skin. His people are know to have bleached birthmarks/ markings. Faiyens are centered around his eyes in a starburst fashion. Further distinguishing him from his people is a non genetic pigmentation in their eyes they call "Sun Kissed" which is a rare coloration of their eyes that cause them to look amber/ orange. With the sunlight catching them they can look quite beautiful, this is usually the only cause for slavers to take Haelions. They make for bad slaves due to their reliance on sunlight, though this isnt required to keep them alive it does maintain their attractiveness and over all strength. Their people are mostly left alone as they are more primitive and dont lack much power in the way of technology or force sensitivity, which makes them too much of a bother to enslave or use being so far out in the system.

Early Life and Appearance| The Finding by the Jedi and Sith

 Faiyen was a very athletic child. Unbeknownst to himself for quite a time he didnt know he could attribute his athleticism to the force. In his youth he wore what most of his people fashioned. Light clothing that wasnt too thick, usually shorts and no sleeves to soak up as much of the Sun. His blond hair was shaved on the sides  and long in the middle worn in a warhawk as was the fashion most his age. Faiyen was also quite quizzical and curious. Being sun touched, he was aware he was different but beyond that he knew it was more than just the color of his eyes. He could sense things, and more than that: while the other kids and adults concerned themselves of matters closer to home, never dreaming of anything beyond, Faiyens mind drifted to that beyond.
From ages 5-7 he began to realize what he had. Though knowledge was limited on his planet the few visitors and merchants that came provided enough information or a way to download information from across the galaxy.
He learned of the Jedi, and as he learned his senses grew. Once he understood what to expect and what he was, his powers began to develop more. He would meditate and could feel past his world. It was a little past his turning of 7 that he realized if he could sense out in the Galaxy, others too, could sense him.

First Contact


 Faiyen could sense it coming. Whatever it was, it was coming to his planet and he knew it was for his connection to the force. Most had warned him of slavers because he was Sun Touched, but he knew this was different. He sent out a message to the faraway capital of Coruscant, but he knew they wouldnt get to him in time. He had to take care of it himself and survive until the Jedi came for him. 

Palpatine commanded his Sith followers to search and  always seek out force sensitive people. Before the time of Maul, Dooku, Greivous and the clone wars, they had more subtle ways of capturing potential force users. In Faiyens case they sent a bounty hunter. Usually told a lie about why they want them captured, and though most of the time the children are too untrained to make a difference, but against Faiyen, this would be a grave error.
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     Faiyen walked the path for what felt like the hundredth time. Tracing every street, alleyway and crevice. If he was being hunted, he would use every advantage he had. He went to the rooftop where the grand finale would be held. Two spots on either side of the roof held two portable holo-projectors. He checked them to make sure they were primed and ready to go.
The noise of ozone breaking drew his attention to the sky. A ship was heading straight for their dock. Faiyen picked up his bow, it wasn't perfect but it would do the job. He flicked the string, making a hum reverberating the strength. He smiled, gulped the last of hesitation and dashed off toward the docking station. Nimbly hopping from building to building. Fear drained from him as if the wind ripped it from his skin itself, leaving him with just a smile plastered on him at a thought of what was to come.
     
     The hunter wiped the sweat from his brow and fanned out his jacket. 'This place was ridiculously hot,'  he thought. He'd be happy once he snatches this kid and gets go back to the big pay check and spent it all on ridiculously over priced drinks at his favorite bar on Nar Shaddah. He didnt know how his employer always found these kids, and quite frankly didn't care.  He was so lost in thought about his fantasy on how he would spend his bounty he barely heard the twang of shot and back stepped just in time for an arrow to crack against the wall next to him around his legs. He snapped his face in the direction of the shot and glared at a kid poking his head over the wall.
"Hey kid! What the hell! " 
The native looked down and embarrassed, he chuckled awkwardly. " Sorry! I thought you were someone else!" 
The hunter started at the kid, "what do you mean? you could have killed someone!"
The kid squinted his eyes in amusement, just as the sun glinted of his eyes, like two sparkling suns and the kid brushed off a comment "I wasnt aiming to hurt!" and like that the kid ran off . But it wasn't before the Hunter realized who he found, the bright orange eyes. This kid was his target. He thanked his lucky stars, this dumb kid just fell in his lap. Gripping is taser rope hooked to his belt he took off after the native.
     
     Faiyen flew through the alleyways, a left here and a right there. He could hear the heavy foot falls of the hunter behind him. Faiyens theory was right, the Hunter was too skilled to be taken out with one shot. So Faiyens plan was as followed, use his knowledge of the town to lead the hunter through a course that would tire him out. He used a balance of hard running to give away his location to the hunter then turn quietly, sending something down an opposite direction to keep the Hunter going the wrong way. Sparingly taking shots to hit the Hunter with his bow. To Faiyens satisfaction, it worked. The Hunter began to become too tired and distracted and at least 3 arrows hit their mark. 2 of them were deflected by his armor but Faiyen managed to find a weak spot where it was just cloth and the Hunter gasped out agroan of pain as the arrow pierced the flesh under his right shoulder. The hunter was human, so his heart was on the opposite side, but it made Faiyen hesitate for a second. It didn't occur to him that he could have killed the hunter if he hit his left side. But he couldn't focus on that now for his hesitation left just the opening the Hunter needed. The Hunter turned his furious eyes onto Faiyen and with a evil grin and a crack of his whip he threw out at Faiyen. The attack almost managed to hit him if it wasn't for Faiyen twisting sideways out of the way, but this landed him on the ground and another whip cracking right toward him, there would be no dodging this. Faiyens energy swelled and he thrust out his hand, the whip hitting an invisible force that shimmered yellow as if a ripple on water. The Hunter looked shocked, which turned the tables as Faiyen leapt forward with speed the Hunter wasn't expecting. Vaulting over the hunter and placing a well aimed blow on back of the hunters head. The crack of his bow hitting the hunters head rang out through the alleyway. Not waiting  to confirm the damage, Faiyen took off, he knew this wouldnt take out the Hunter. He sprinted down the path he had memorized every day since his plans conception, it was time to end this.

     The hunter roared down the path Faiyen took, flinging his whip back left and right creating long sizzling slashes in the wall. He was gaining on Faiyen, no longer holding back, throwing caution to the wind he charged down the alleyways. He turned just in time to see movement up to the roofs and an arrow fly down from the right side. In two quick movements he jumped to the left dodging the arrow, planting his boot on the wall and propelled him to the right where he finally saw the kid in view hunkered down right in the middle of the roof, and with no where to go as the Hunter flew toward him.
     In the Hunters frustrations and exhaustion what he didnt see was Faiyen ricochet his arrow from the left rooftop which made the appearance of coming from the right. Nor did he notice the two little projectors on the rooftop. As his hands began to wrap around Feiyan they merely passed right through and just landed with a hard thud on his face. He barely had time to register what was happening before the rooftops cracks spread and broke away as he tumbled through, with just a last glimpse of blonde hair waving in the wind and startling orange eyes shimmering in the sun. Before he even landed below many arrows shot out of holsters in the room below, attached to stings and coated in black tar like substance from beasts below the planet. The hunter was trapped, the hunter had failed, and Faiyen stood above in the opening a large smile plastered on his face savoring his first true victory.

 Arrival of the Jedi

Master Shaak Ti arrived to a grinning boy swinging his feet and basking in the sun. Faiyen hops off the wall and runs over to the Torgruta, he bows as Shaak Ti descends the ships stairs giving him a quizzical look.
Faiyens reddens when he sees her look, "Is..is this not acceptable?" He stutters becoming self conscious of his greeting. The corner of shaak tis lips curl with the hint of a smirk, bowing back she replies "Oh no, quite acceptable, You misread me. I was merely wondering, were you expecting me?"
Faiyen brightened at her ease of acceptance. His nerves drifting away. "Oh yes! I could feel you coming, like I felt the bad man." Shaak Ti betrayed her call for just a second but it registered with Faiyen, he continued. "Did..you not know the bad man was coming." She looked out over the village a seriousness in her eyes, "Show me." She smiled placing a comforting hand on his head.

Fiayen showed her the man, who in his desperation bit a capsule of poison hidden in his mouth. Clearly the people who hired him were very serious about privacy, and their identity. After checking with Faiyen it was clear he was not there simply because he was to be a slave but for his connection to the force. Shaak Ti was very impressed. This boy displayed most qualities needed to be a Jedi. She relayed, in her initial reports, that Faiyen connection and focus was above average of his age. Though he was not able to effectively move objects with telekinesis he was able to create strong force shields that often shone in a yellow or orange color. 
When asked of his parents, Faiyen described a problem of his world. The sun was becoming too dangerous, centuries caused the Sun to become unhealthy. He wved a hand out toward his town, which was mostly deserted as an example of the lack of people on the surface anymore. Alot of Haelions went underground and adapt to a sunless life. Though this prolonged their life, they forever changed and could not go back to the surface. Faiyen ,at the time of his departure of his home planet, had said goodbye to his parents one year prior. It showed, to Shaak Ti, his understanding in change and ability to let go and accept loss. A trial most jedi fail. Shaak Ti and the rest of the council were happy to allow Faiyen to become a youngling and train to become a jedi. Their main relief was this bounty hunter was not able to capture this young force user, but brought concern, how many of these children have been targeted, and captured by an unknown enemy.

Faiyen was 7 at the time of Phantom Menance. Making him two years younger than Anakin Skywalker. Shaak Ti was not made Feiyins master as she was promoted to council soon after her return replacing Master Yaddle. 


 Clone Wars and After

 Faiyen was a admirable Jedi. He became a knight in the midst of the Clone wars. He was still a bit  on the young side but the war had caused an acceleration of most things during this time. He soon was in command of his troops though, they took smaller battles and skirmishes or defensive jobs. 
His skills had developed him into a dangerous opponent when it comes to close combat. He was very quick, using the force to speed in fast and get out. More of a scalpel than a hammer. His acrobatics and senses never dulled as his ability to dodge and predict shots were only heightened throughout the war.
He uses a common lightsaber but ended up commissioning a shorter thinner blade that he holds  with a reverse grip. This he can use better for quick attacks where he usually dispatches the limbs of enemies quickly.
His use of telekinesis was average but nothing impressive. His shield however continued to be a staple of his abilities even later being strong enough to stop blaster bolts.
He still wore clothing similar to when he was younger, short sleeves and pants trimmed just below the knees. Still in a similar robe style to other Jedi, more armor during the clone wars.
His hair kept the similar style to his home, shaved sides in a warhawk fashion but much longer twisted into a braid that reached his lower back. He would never say it outloud but he thought it looked and felt cool when he was flipping and speeding around, the way his braid whipped around. Its even helped him a couple of times as a back up weapon.
When order 66 was initiated, Faiyens senses did not fail him. He sensed the darkness as hundreds of jedis were killed. Faiyen was fortunate to be on a sun planet full of beaches. Not currently in battle he was taking a moment to himself on the cliff sides meditating. He managed to evade the troopers and dispatch them. Angry from their betrayel (unknown to the fact they were mind controlled) he showed no mercy that day. Going so far as to stopping the blaster bolts of troopers and directing them back to kill the owners. 
Faiyen received the warning from Obi-wan and yoda, not returning to Coruscant and going into hiding.

After this Faiyen seldom used his lightsabers after Order 66. Mostly his small shoto blade. Instead adopting again his home planets style of combat, a bow. But no longer was he firing wood and metal. He began to carry an advanced blaster bow that fired energy that could piece or stun. It also came equipped with a portable shield he could use to block fire so he wouldn't have to risk using his force powers as much. Conveniently, however, it actually let him use his force powers and enemies would just attribute to hitting his bow shield.
He spent most of his time as a bounty hunter, helping the people in small ways but never officially joining the rebel alliance.